From 3579b91efc4ea3729f90d0c0c1289b797734ffed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Xyueta <vojtech@disroot.org>
Date: Wed, 18 Oct 2023 18:59:20 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] feat: revise playbook.conf

---
 src/playbook/playbook.conf | 27 ++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/playbook/playbook.conf b/src/playbook/playbook.conf
index 3c6f0e16b2..4c6d02b331 100644
--- a/src/playbook/playbook.conf
+++ b/src/playbook/playbook.conf
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 	<Description><![CDATA[This Playbook will deploy AtlasOS, making your computer snappier and more private with lots of usability improvements.
 
 ⚠️ This will make changes to Windows that require a reinstall to revert. See the documentation before use.]]></Description>
-	<Details>An open and transparent modification to Windows, designed to optimize performance, privacy and stability.</Details>
+	<Details>An open and lightweight modification to Windows, designed to optimize performance, privacy and security.</Details>
 	<Version>0.3.0</Version>
 	<SupportedBuilds>
 		<string>19045</string>
@@ -23,13 +23,13 @@
 	</Requirements>
 	<Overhaul>true</Overhaul>
 	<ProductCode>64</ProductCode>
-	<EstimatedMinutes>20</EstimatedMinutes>
+	<EstimatedMinutes>15</EstimatedMinutes>
 	<Git>https://github.com/Atlas-OS/Atlas</Git>
 	<Website>https://atlasos.net</Website>
-	<DonateLink>https://www.buymeacoffee.com/atlasos</DonateLink>
+	<DonateLink>https://ko-fi.com/atlasos</DonateLink>
 	<FeaturePages>
-		<RadioPage IsRequired="true" DefaultOption="defender-enable" Description="Disabling Defender is at your own risk, it can be disabled for performance.">
-			<TopLine Text="You can change this later in the Atlas folder."/>
+		<RadioPage IsRequired="true" DefaultOption="defender-enable" Description="Disabling Defender has risks, but it can also improve performance.">
+			<TopLine Text="It can be changed in the Atlas folder later."/>
 			<Options>
 				<RadioOption>
 					<Text>Enable Defender (recommended)</Text>
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
 			</Options>
 			<BottomLine Text="Learn more" Link="https://docs.atlasos.net/getting-started/post-installation/security/#defender"/>
 		</RadioPage>
-		<RadioPage IsRequired="true" DefaultOption="mitigations-default" Description="Disabling mitigations reduces security, yet improves performance only on older CPUs.">
-			<TopLine Text="You can change this later in the Atlas folder."/>
+		<RadioPage IsRequired="true" DefaultOption="mitigations-default" Description="Disabling mitigations reduces security, but improves performance on older CPUs.">
+			<TopLine Text="It can be changed in the Atlas folder later."/>
 			<Options>
 				<RadioOption>
 					<Text>Default Windows Mitigations (recommended)</Text>
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@
 			</Options>
 			<BottomLine Text="Learn more" Link="https://docs.atlasos.net/getting-started/post-installation/security/#mitigations"/>
 		</RadioPage>
-		<RadioPage IsRequired="true" DefaultOption="vbs-disable" Description="Enabling Core Isolation protects important parts of Windows, but it reduces performance.">
-			<TopLine Text="You can change this later in Windows Security."/>
+		<RadioPage IsRequired="true" DefaultOption="vbs-disable" Description="Enabling core isolation protects important parts of Windows, but at the cost of performance.">
+			<TopLine Text="It can be changed in the Atlas folder later."/>
 			<Options>
 				<RadioOption>
 					<Text>Disable Core Isolation (recommended)</Text>
@@ -70,7 +70,8 @@
 			</Options>
 			<BottomLine Text="Learn more" Link="https://docs.atlasos.net/getting-started/post-installation/security/#core-isolation"/>
 		</RadioPage>
-		<CheckboxPage IsRequired="true" Description="Select the miscellaneous options you would like to use, which you can change later.">
+		<CheckboxPage IsRequired="true" Description="Select the miscellaneous options you would like to use.">
+			<TopLine Text="They can be changed in the Atlas folder later."/>
 			<Options>
 				<CheckboxOption>
 					<Text>Remove Microsoft Edge</Text>
@@ -87,8 +88,8 @@
 			</Options>
 			<BottomLine Text="Learn more" Link="https://docs.atlasos.net/getting-started/post-installation/configuration"/>
 		</CheckboxPage>
-		<RadioImagePage CheckDefaultBrowser="true" DependsOn="uninstall-edge" DefaultOption="browser-brave" Description="Select your preferred browser to be installed, as Microsoft Edge will be replaced.">
-			<TopLine Text="Chrome isn't good on privacy, it's not recommended."/>
+		<RadioImagePage CheckDefaultBrowser="true" DependsOn="uninstall-edge" DefaultOption="browser-brave" Description="Select your preferred browser to install, as Microsoft Edge will be uninstalled.">
+			<TopLine Text="Chrome isn't good for privacy, it's not recommended."/>
 			<Options>
 				<RadioImageOption None="true"/>
 				<RadioImageOption>
@@ -115,7 +116,7 @@
 			</Options>
 			<BottomLine Text="Learn more" Link="https://docs.atlasos.net/getting-started/post-installation/software/web-browsers"/>
 		</RadioImagePage>
-		<RadioPage IsRequired="true" DependsOn="browser-librewolf" DefaultOption="librewolf-winupdater" Description="Please select how you would like LibreWolf to be installed.">
+		<RadioPage IsRequired="true" DependsOn="browser-librewolf" DefaultOption="librewolf-winupdater" Description="Please choose how you want to install LibreWolf.">
 			<TopLine Text="WinGet is Windows' CLI package manager."/>
 			<Options>
 				<RadioOption>