From d3a768a8fd245362c63a439d6df50a3e47f8b357 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Fri, 1 Mar 2024 16:55:04 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 01/11] Update PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx minor copy changes --- .../PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx | 20 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx index 9ad19482a4a7..615389571b92 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx @@ -23,21 +23,19 @@ import SCREENS from '@src/SCREENS'; // This is not translated because it is a message coming from concierge, which only supports english const messageCopy = { [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.TRACK]: - 'Great! To track your expenses, I suggest you create a workspace to keep everything contained:\n' + + 'To track your expenses, create a workspace first to keep everything organized:\n' + '\n' + - '1. Press your avatar icon\n' + - '2. Choose Workspaces\n' + - '3. Choose New Workspace\n' + - '4. Name your workspace something meaningful (eg, "My Business Expenses")\n' + + '1. Click the green *+* > *New workspace*.\n' + + '2. Your new workspace is now active.\n' + + '3. To update your workspace name, click *Profile* > *Name*.\n' + '\n' + - 'Once you have your workspace set up, you can add expenses to it as follows:\n' + + 'Next, start adding expenses to your workspace:\n' + '\n' + - '1. Choose My Business Expenses (or whatever you named it) in the list of chat rooms\n' + - '2. Choose the + button in the chat compose window\n' + - '3. Choose Request money\n' + - "4. Choose what kind of expense you'd like to log, whether a manual expense, scanned receipt, or tracked distance.\n" + + '1. Click the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' + + '2. Add an expense of scan a receipt.\n' + + '3. Choose your workspace as the destination.\n' + '\n' + - "That'll be stored in your My Business Expenses room for your later access. Thanks for asking, and let me know how it goes!", + 'Be sure to track all of your expenses in your new workspace to keep everything in one place. Let me know how it goes!', [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.SUBMIT]: 'Hi there, to submit expenses for reimbursement, please:\n' + '\n' + From 45bbba884026d160693910798e153527bab5951f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Sun, 3 Mar 2024 15:07:11 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 02/11] Update PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx --- src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx index 615389571b92..cbd54737588b 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ const messageCopy = { 'Next, start adding expenses to your workspace:\n' + '\n' + '1. Click the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' + - '2. Add an expense of scan a receipt.\n' + + '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' + '3. Choose your workspace as the destination.\n' + '\n' + 'Be sure to track all of your expenses in your new workspace to keep everything in one place. Let me know how it goes!', From 7ca0f1e4b677875e27e5b8a091c6ecb5c6108f8b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Sun, 3 Mar 2024 15:22:38 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 03/11] Update PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx --- .../PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx | 34 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx index cbd54737588b..306769932577 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ import SCREENS from '@src/SCREENS'; // This is not translated because it is a message coming from concierge, which only supports english const messageCopy = { [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.TRACK]: - 'To track your expenses, create a workspace first to keep everything organized:\n' + + 'Here's how to start tracking business spend for taxes:\n' + '\n' + '1. Click the green *+* > *New workspace*.\n' + '2. Your new workspace is now active.\n' + @@ -35,30 +35,28 @@ const messageCopy = { '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' + '3. Choose your workspace as the destination.\n' + '\n' + - 'Be sure to track all of your expenses in your new workspace to keep everything in one place. Let me know how it goes!', + 'Be sure to track all of your expenses in your new workspace to keep everything organized. Let me know how it goes!', [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.SUBMIT]: - 'Hi there, to submit expenses for reimbursement, please:\n' + + 'Here's how to submit expenses for reimbursement:\n' + '\n' + - '1. Press the big green + button\n' + - '2. Choose Request money\n' + - '3. Indicate how much to request, either manually, by scanning a receipt, or by tracking distance\n' + - '4. Enter the email address or phone number of your boss\n' + + '1. Click the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' + + '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' + + '3. Enter your reimburser's email or phone number.\n' + '\n' + - "And we'll take it from there to get you paid back. Please give it a shot and let me know how it goes!", + "And we'll take it from there to get you paid back. Give it a shot and let me know how it goes!", [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.MANAGE_TEAM]: '', [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.CHAT_SPLIT]: - 'Hi there, to split an expense such as with a friend, please:\n' + + 'Here's how to split expenses with friends:\n' + '\n' + - '1. Press the big green + button\n' + - '2. Choose *Request money*\n' + - '3. Indicate how much was spent, either manually, by scanning a receipt, or by tracking distance\n' + - '4. Enter the email address or phone number of your friend\n' + - '5. Press *Split* next to their name\n' + - '6. Repeat as many times as you like for each of your friends\n' + - '7. Press *Add to split* when done adding friends\n' + - '8. Press Split to split the bill\n' + + '1. Tap the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' + + '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' + + '3. Enter your friend's email or phone number.\n' + + '4. Tap *Split* next to their contact info.\n' + + '5. Repeat for any additional friends.\n' + + '6. Tap *Add to split* when you're done.\n' + + '7. Review and tap *Split* to send your request(s).\n' + '\n' + - "This will send a money request to each of your friends for however much they owe you, and we'll take care of getting you paid back. Thanks for asking, and let me know how it goes!", + "We'll send a money request to each of your friends and make sure you get paid back. Let me know how it goes!", }; const menuIcons = { From 976a5d927e02052707c83986250010f6b521f54a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Sun, 3 Mar 2024 15:27:00 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 04/11] Update PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx escaping! --- .../PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx index 306769932577..36b1d9e1d52b 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ import SCREENS from '@src/SCREENS'; // This is not translated because it is a message coming from concierge, which only supports english const messageCopy = { [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.TRACK]: - 'Here's how to start tracking business spend for taxes:\n' + + 'Here\'s how to start tracking business spend for taxes:\n' + '\n' + '1. Click the green *+* > *New workspace*.\n' + '2. Your new workspace is now active.\n' + @@ -37,23 +37,23 @@ const messageCopy = { '\n' + 'Be sure to track all of your expenses in your new workspace to keep everything organized. Let me know how it goes!', [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.SUBMIT]: - 'Here's how to submit expenses for reimbursement:\n' + + 'Here\'s how to submit expenses for reimbursement:\n' + '\n' + '1. Click the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' + '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' + - '3. Enter your reimburser's email or phone number.\n' + + '3. Enter your reimburser\'s email or phone number.\n' + '\n' + "And we'll take it from there to get you paid back. Give it a shot and let me know how it goes!", [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.MANAGE_TEAM]: '', [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.CHAT_SPLIT]: - 'Here's how to split expenses with friends:\n' + + 'Here\'s how to split expenses with friends:\n' + '\n' + '1. Tap the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' + '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' + - '3. Enter your friend's email or phone number.\n' + + '3. Enter your friend\'s email or phone number.\n' + '4. Tap *Split* next to their contact info.\n' + '5. Repeat for any additional friends.\n' + - '6. Tap *Add to split* when you're done.\n' + + '6. Tap *Add to split* when you\'re done.\n' + '7. Review and tap *Split* to send your request(s).\n' + '\n' + "We'll send a money request to each of your friends and make sure you get paid back. Let me know how it goes!", From 73965cb71fc882d1dd2a8f5b066d811a8fc78b0b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Sun, 3 Mar 2024 15:36:19 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 05/11] Update ManageTeamsExpensesPage.tsx --- .../OnboardEngagement/ManageTeamsExpensesPage.tsx | 11 +++++------ 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/ManageTeamsExpensesPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/ManageTeamsExpensesPage.tsx index 0136ec4c5a01..f27c821abd8c 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/ManageTeamsExpensesPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/ManageTeamsExpensesPage.tsx @@ -26,14 +26,13 @@ const menuIcons = { // This is not translated because it is a message coming from concierge, which only supports english const messageCopy = - "Great! To manage your team's expenses, create a workspace to keep everything contained:\n" + + "Here's how to manage your team's expenses:\n" + '\n' + - '1. Press your avatar icon\n' + - '2. Choose Workspaces\n' + - '3. Choose New Workspace\n' + - '4. Name your workspace something meaningful (eg, "Galaxy Food Inc.")\n' + + '1. Click the green *+* > *New workspace*.\n' + + '2. Your new workspace is now active.\n' + + '3. To update your workspace name, click *Profile* > *Name*.\n' + '\n' + - 'Once you have your workspace set up, you can invite your team to it via the Members pane and connect a business bank account to reimburse them!'; + 'Next, click *Members* to invite your team to your workspace, then add your business bank account to reimburse them!'; function ManageTeamsExpensesModal() { const styles = useThemeStyles(); From 04873fd36f459f86807d1b9a6119efc5711919fb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Mon, 4 Mar 2024 10:54:03 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 06/11] Update src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx Co-authored-by: Nikki Wines --- src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx index 36b1d9e1d52b..16c896b8efbd 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ import SCREENS from '@src/SCREENS'; // This is not translated because it is a message coming from concierge, which only supports english const messageCopy = { [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.TRACK]: - 'Here\'s how to start tracking business spend for taxes:\n' + + "Here's how to start tracking business spend for taxes:\n" + '\n' + '1. Click the green *+* > *New workspace*.\n' + '2. Your new workspace is now active.\n' + From fe21ab1ca3b8b32b6731e257d6faf7559e5664eb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Mon, 4 Mar 2024 10:54:23 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 07/11] Update src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx Co-authored-by: Nikki Wines --- src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx index 16c896b8efbd..e04ef2f55074 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ const messageCopy = { '\n' + 'Be sure to track all of your expenses in your new workspace to keep everything organized. Let me know how it goes!', [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.SUBMIT]: - 'Here\'s how to submit expenses for reimbursement:\n' + + "Here's how to submit expenses for reimbursement:\n" + '\n' + '1. Click the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' + '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' + From 0285037b2a35d5eed35f86065ea8547853d23c00 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Mon, 4 Mar 2024 10:54:44 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 08/11] Update src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx Co-authored-by: Nikki Wines --- src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx index e04ef2f55074..03d860ef5d40 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ const messageCopy = { '\n' + '1. Click the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' + '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' + - '3. Enter your reimburser\'s email or phone number.\n' + + "3. Enter your reimburser's email or phone number.\n" + '\n' + "And we'll take it from there to get you paid back. Give it a shot and let me know how it goes!", [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.MANAGE_TEAM]: '', From 36c422ed7e274d970c539f9921ff80878653424d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Mon, 4 Mar 2024 10:55:17 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 09/11] Update src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx Co-authored-by: Nikki Wines --- src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx index 03d860ef5d40..5d4ca2444577 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ const messageCopy = { "And we'll take it from there to get you paid back. Give it a shot and let me know how it goes!", [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.MANAGE_TEAM]: '', [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.CHAT_SPLIT]: - 'Here\'s how to split expenses with friends:\n' + + "Here's how to split expenses with friends:\n" + '\n' + '1. Tap the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' + '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' + From 2f932074ccdf6383283a1ec3fbe12e508e22847f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Mon, 4 Mar 2024 10:55:37 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 10/11] Update src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx Co-authored-by: Nikki Wines --- src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx index 5d4ca2444577..0314971a8e1b 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ const messageCopy = { '\n' + '1. Tap the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' + '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' + - '3. Enter your friend\'s email or phone number.\n' + + "3. Enter your friend's email or phone number.\n" + '4. Tap *Split* next to their contact info.\n' + '5. Repeat for any additional friends.\n' + '6. Tap *Add to split* when you\'re done.\n' + From 84d2c3fb92d64bb9a034706a18c3c9ce635cfd8f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: James Dean Date: Mon, 4 Mar 2024 10:55:50 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 11/11] Update src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx Co-authored-by: Nikki Wines --- src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx index 0314971a8e1b..747b23e943ca 100644 --- a/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx +++ b/src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ const messageCopy = { "3. Enter your friend's email or phone number.\n" + '4. Tap *Split* next to their contact info.\n' + '5. Repeat for any additional friends.\n' + - '6. Tap *Add to split* when you\'re done.\n' + + "6. Tap *Add to split* when you're done.\n" + '7. Review and tap *Split* to send your request(s).\n' + '\n' + "We'll send a money request to each of your friends and make sure you get paid back. Let me know how it goes!",