Dear Frank
I'm writing this letter to highly recommend the discussion meeting over Sino-America Cultural Differences hold at the International Communication Center on December 28, 2015. You will certainly find this activity attractive.
Actually, in order to create a platform for American students and Chinese students to know each other and develop friendship, this will be held. Then, they will not be distant any longer. In particular, you are remarkably interested in Chinese culture, so I think the meeting should not be missed.
In brief, I believe you will be interested in it and choose to attend it.
Cordially yours
Li Ming
| 改动句子 | 改动说明 |
|---|---|
| a platform | platform是可数名词，前面应该加a |
| meeting will be held | 会议还没开呢，应该用将来时 |
| be distant | distance是名词，此处应该用形容词，并且应该加上谓语动词啊 |
| Chinese culture | 中国文化，感觉Chinese culture更好一些 |
| I believe | 前面加个我相信...，感觉意思更贴切 |
| interested in it | 对...感兴趣，be interested in |