Dear friends,
I'm so moved that you still remember my birthday and grateful for your kindness to plan a birthday party for me. However, I'm afraid I have to decline your offer. As a student, I have worked for my life since entering university. Notably, a party is a bit too expensive for us. As is konwn to all, I had to eat noodles all a week for my 20 years old birthday party. With this in my mind, I plan to go to Central Park for mountain climbing.
Hopefully, my feeling can be understood by you and on that day we can go to the park together and have a good time.
Cordially yours
LiMing
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