Dear Mike,
I'm writing this letter to you to express my apologies to you for forwarding the fake news on the Internet saying that you landed a boring and badly-paid job.
I was so worried when I heard you were doing a badly-paid job. Hence, I did not confirm to you before publishing this information. Notably, I didn't realize this serious mistake. I express my sincere apologies for my fault. Actually, Neither did I take into account your feelings nor realize it would cause you such a problem.
Please accept my apologies again. I hope you will find a satisfactory job as soon as possible.
Cordially yours,
Li Ming
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| 改动句子 | 改动说明 |
|---|---|
| express | explain是“解释”的意思，此处应该是“表达” |
| apologies | 此处应该用复数 |
| to you | 向某人表达歉意应该是to sb |
| forwarding ...badly-paid job | 表示歉意的原因应该是“转发了网上的假消息”，而不是“他做着无聊低薪的工作的事情在网上流传” |
| heard | 听说原型是hear，过去分词是heard，heart是心脏的意思 |
| were doing | 句子没有谓语动词，此处可以用过去进行时 |
| a | job是可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词a |
| I | 句子没主语 |
| to | 向某人确认应该是confirm to sb |
| before publishing | 此处你想表达的意思应该是“在转发这个消息之前没有向你确认”，那么应该用before |
| Notably | 此处应该用副词，notable是形容词 |
| Neither did ... problem | 此处可以使用一个倒装句 |