From e7a64110997b9fed39a8badd7151b06fc2c3233f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Edward Cormany Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2024 14:12:23 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Joe's feedback --- api/docs/v2/parameters/defining.rst | 2 +- api/docs/v2/parameters/use_case_cherrypicking.rst | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/api/docs/v2/parameters/defining.rst b/api/docs/v2/parameters/defining.rst index ea22e4b09a3..eb8caf4c957 100644 --- a/api/docs/v2/parameters/defining.rst +++ b/api/docs/v2/parameters/defining.rst @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ During run setup, the technician can choose from a menu of the provided choices. CSV Parameters -------------- -CSV parameters accept any valid comma-separated file. You don't need to specify the format of the data. Due to this flexibility, they do not have default values. Separately provide standard operating procedures or template files to the scientists and technicians who will create the tabular data your protocol relies on. +CSV parameters accept any valid comma-separated file. You don't need to specify the format of the data. Due to this flexibility, CSV parameters do not have default values. Separately provide standard operating procedures or template files to the scientists and technicians who will create the tabular data your protocol relies on. Briefly describe the purpose of your CSV parameter when defining it. diff --git a/api/docs/v2/parameters/use_case_cherrypicking.rst b/api/docs/v2/parameters/use_case_cherrypicking.rst index dcfdef32edd..75d2345edde 100644 --- a/api/docs/v2/parameters/use_case_cherrypicking.rst +++ b/api/docs/v2/parameters/use_case_cherrypicking.rst @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ The destination labware and well order will remain fixed, to focus on using thes Preparing the CSV ================= -First, we need to set up the CSV parameter. The data format we expect for this protocol is simple enough to fully explain in the parameter's description. +To get started, let's set up the CSV parameter. The data format we expect for this protocol is simple enough to fully explain in the parameter's description. .. code-block:: python @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ Now ``well_data`` is a list with four elements, one for each row in the file. We Loading Source Labware ====================== -First, we need to load the source labware. Let's assume that we always use Opentrons Tough PCR plates for both source and destination plates. Then we need to determine the locations for loading source plates from the first column of the CSV. This will have three steps: +We'll use the data from the ``source slot`` column as part of loading the source labware. Let's assume that we always use Opentrons Tough PCR plates for both source and destination plates. Then we need to determine the locations for loading source plates from the first column of the CSV. This will have three steps: - Using a list comprehension to get data from the ``source slot`` column. - Deduplicating the items in the column.