Improvement to English language, readability and coherence. #3
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- Removed redundant statements - Limited "you" and "we" constructs - Converted some paragraphs to lists and v.v. where that made sense. - Reworked stakeholder-tables(Uniformization of similar statements) - Attempt to solve the discrepancy between the numbered 1,2,3 list in first paragraph vs. paragraphs 2.1, 2.2 and 2.3 to better align with the contents - header font size/style - Uniformization of mixed use of "ad-hoc approach" and "DIY approach"
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Hey Seba,
Ik zag een update voorbijkomen van deze repo en had vandaag wat tijd over, dus heb een aantal verbetervoorstellen aangebracht aan dit hoofdstuk. Je mag ze natuurlijk integraal overnemen, maar als bepaalde dingen van betekenis veranderen door mijn aanpassingen, dan kan je die natuurlijk schrappen; het zijn maar suggesties :).
Groetjes,
Georges Bolssens