Submission 438, Abstract and Presentation Updates #75
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Co-Authored-By: Adrian Demleitner <[email protected]>
Co-Authored-By: Adrian Demleitner <[email protected]>
Co-Authored-By: Adrian Demleitner <[email protected]>
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10-15: Strong introduction with a minor grammatical suggestionThe introduction effectively sets the context for your research and highlights its significance. It provides a clear overview of your focus on video game programming practices of the 1980s and 1990s, and addresses the challenges in accessing primary sources.
There's a minor grammatical issue to address:
-To conduct this research, I'm working with two primary datasets. The first is called the Ludens Images Dataset. It contains a bit more than 3800 images from 35 games relevant to the Confoederatio Ludens project, all of which have strong connections to Switzerland. We would have around 220 video games in our corpus, but due to the obscurity of many of these games, it is difficult to get a hold on screenshots and I've primarily had to rely on video stills from Let's Play videos to populate this dataset. +To conduct this research, I'm working with two primary datasets. The first is called the Ludens Images Dataset. It contains a bit more than 3,800 images from 35 games relevant to the Confoederatio Ludens project, all of which have strong connections to Switzerland. We would have around 220 video games in our corpus, but due to the obscurity of many of these games, it is difficult to get a hold of screenshots, and I've primarily had to rely on video stills from Let's Play videos to populate this dataset.This change improves readability and corrects minor grammatical issues.
16-29: Comprehensive framework explanation with minor suggestionsThe description of your datasets and the Framework for the Analysis of Video game Representation (FAVR) is thorough and well-explained. The introduction of ludemes as an additional element to FAVR is a valuable contribution to the framework.
Here are a few minor suggestions for improvement:
- Line 24: Consider rephrasing for clarity:
-Modes refer to the overall structure of what's visible on screen and its specific function, like title screens or gameplay screens. +Modes refer to the overall structure of what's visible on screen and its specific function, such as title screens or gameplay screens.
- Line 26: Add a comma after "In contrast" and fix a minor grammatical issue:
-In contrast construction delves deeper into the layered nature of video games images, recognizing that the visual representation is composed of multiple conceptual planes. +In contrast, construction delves deeper into the layered nature of video game images, recognizing that the visual representation is composed of multiple conceptual planes.
- Line 26: Correct the verb usage:
-These attributes help reading into technical aspects of what we see on screen, a bit like art historians that know what kind of pigmets were used by looking at a painting's colors in conjunction with when and where it was painted. +These attributes help us read into technical aspects of what we see on screen, a bit like art historians who know what kind of pigments were used by looking at a painting's colors in conjunction with when and where it was painted.These minor changes will enhance the clarity and correctness of your presentation transcript.
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[uncategorized] ~18-~18: Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...s difficult to get a hold on screenshots and I've primarily had to rely on video sti...(COMMA_COMPOUND_SENTENCE)
[style] ~24-~24: ‘overall structure’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ... spaces, and planes. Modes refer to the overall structure of what's visible on screen and its spe...(EN_WORDINESS_PREMIUM_OVERALL_STRUCTURE)
[uncategorized] ~26-~26: A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb ‘contrast’.
Context: ...f the screen's visual organization. In contrast construction delves deeper into the lay...(SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA)
[grammar] ~26-~26: The verb ‘help’ is used with an infinitive.
Context: ...ojection methods. These attributes help reading into technical aspects of what we see o...(ADVISE_VBG)
[style] ~26-~26: ‘in conjunction with’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ... used by looking at a painting's colors in conjunction with when and where it was painted. Planes o...(EN_WORDINESS_PREMIUM_IN_CONJUNCTION_WITH)
30-40: Insightful findings with suggestions for clarityYour findings section effectively demonstrates the application of FAVR and provides interesting insights from the VHS-Dataset analysis. The acknowledgment of challenges in identifying ludemes using computer vision models adds depth to your research.
Here are a few suggestions to enhance clarity:
- Line 32: Consider rephrasing for clarity:
-So far, FAVR has proven invaluable in two specific cases in my research. First, in an exploratory case study, I investigated the ratio of static to dynamic content to infer computational resource requirements. +So far, FAVR has proven invaluable in two specific cases in my research. First, in an exploratory case study, I investigated the ratio of static to dynamic content to infer computational resource requirements of games from that era.
- Line 32: Correct the spelling and improve clarity:
-Was the game made for a certain system, the dynamics of video game graphics can conclude if a game was written in BASIC or Assembly. +Based on the dynamics of video game graphics, we can infer whether a game was written in BASIC or Assembly, and for which system it was developed.
- Line 40: Improve conciseness:
-I'm at the moment in the process of compiling the research on the VHS-dataset into a paper, so I'm not going into any more details for now. +I'm currently compiling the research on the VHS-dataset into a paper, so I won't go into further details at this time.These changes will improve the readability and precision of your findings section.
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[style] ~32-~32: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can”.
Context: ...ic parts of a video game image are, one is able to deduct certain technological aspects. W...(BE_ABLE_TO)
[misspelling] ~34-~34: Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.
Context: ...lyses. Either they are concentrating on a images content and semantic discourses ...(EN_A_VS_AN)
[uncategorized] ~34-~34: Use a comma before ‘or’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...a images content and semantic discourses or they focus on technical aspects and des...(COMMA_COMPOUND_SENTENCE)
[grammar] ~34-~34: The article is probably missing here.
Context: ... same time. That was certainly the case in 1980s video game development. I believe that ...(IN_1990s)
[uncategorized] ~38-~38: A comma is probably missing here.
Context: ...entation without perspective. Regarding semantics we can pull up this nsfw-ish one. The a...(MISSING_COMMA_AFTER_INTRODUCTORY_PHRASE)
[grammar] ~38-~38: It looks like ‘clusters’ doesn’t match ‘a’. Did you mean “a cluster” or just “clusters”?
Context: ...t symbolic. Lastly and is an example of a clusters around a video game genre. The Boxing...(A_NNS_IN)
[style] ~40-~40: For conciseness, consider replacing this expression with an adverb.
Context: ...by a few semantic-formal elements. I'm at the moment in the process of compiling the researc...(AT_THE_MOMENT)
[typographical] ~40-~40: Consider adding a comma here.
Context: ...lopers and designers did their job. But for now they pose a semantic category, that is ...(FOR_NOW_COMMA)
[style] ~40-~40: Consider a shorter alternative to avoid wordiness.
Context: ...continue the work on the FAVR ontology, in order to teach the computer to see these element...(IN_ORDER_TO_PREMIUM)
41-52: Strong conclusion with minor refinement suggestionsYour conclusion effectively ties your research to the conference theme and acknowledges both the challenges and potential impact of your work. The invitation for collaboration is a great way to engage the audience.
Here are a few suggestions for refinement:
- Line 44: Correct the spelling of "takeaway":
-I believe this to be an important take away for this conference. +I believe this to be an important takeaway for this conference.
- Line 46: Consider an alternative to "deeper" for variety:
-By combining historical analysis, technological understanding, and visual examination, I believe we can gain deeper insights into the evolution of video game graphics and programming practices. +By combining historical analysis, technological understanding, and visual examination, I believe we can gain more profound insights into the evolution of video game graphics and programming practices.
- Line 50: Improve conciseness and clarity:
-If you have some free time on your hand, I'd be more than welcoming if you want to join this endeavour. +I'd welcome your participation in this endeavor if you're interested and have the time.These minor changes will enhance the polish of your conclusion and maintain the engaging tone of your presentation.
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[grammar] ~44-~44: The noun “takeaway” is spelled as one word.
Context: ...emes. I believe this to be an important take away for this conference. Algorithms don't m...(TAKEAWAY)
[style] ~44-~44: The phrase “a variety of” may be wordy. To make your writing clearer, consider replacing it.
Context: ...ital objects means looking at them from a variety of perspectives, in a multiplicity of form...(A_VARIETY_OF)
[typographical] ~44-~44: Consider adding a comma here.
Context: ...rspectives, in a multiplicity of forms, and of course their context. By combining historical...(OF_COURSE_COMMA)
[style] ~46-~46: Consider an alternative adjective to strengthen your wording.
Context: ...sual examination, I believe we can gain deeper insights into the evolution of video ga...(DEEP_PROFOUND)
[typographical] ~50-~50: Consider adding a comma here.
Context: ...s, through the application of FAVR. But for now the creation and maintaining of the dat...(FOR_NOW_COMMA)
[style] ~50-~50: The word “free” tends to be overused. Consider using an alternative wording to strengthen your writing.
Context: ...les from the datasets. If you have some free time on your hand, I'd be more than welcomin...(FREE_TIME)
submissions/438/references.bib (4)
71-77: Consider enhancing the bibliographic entry.While the addition of "Illusion als Versprechen" by Birken is relevant, the entry could benefit from more detailed metadata. Consider adding:
- The type of publication (journal article, conference paper, etc.)
- Publication details (journal name, volume, pages if applicable)
- An abstract or brief description in English
- Keywords to improve searchability
These additions would make the entry more informative and useful for researchers.
195-209: Excellent addition with a minor suggestion.The new entry for "Parler le jeu vidéo" by Hansen is comprehensive and highly relevant to video game studies. The detailed abstract and keywords provide valuable context.
Consider adding an English translation of the title in square brackets to improve accessibility for non-French speakers:
- title = {Parler le jeu vidéo : Le ludème comme unité minimale d'une grammaire vidéoludique\,?}, + title = {Parler le jeu vidéo : Le ludème comme unité minimale d'une grammaire vidéoludique\,? [Speaking Video Games: The Ludeme as a Minimal Unit of a Video Game Grammar?]},
296-307: Relevant addition with a suggestion for improvement.The new entry for "Racing the Beam" by Montfort and Bogost is a valuable addition to the bibliography, focusing on the Atari Video Computer System. To enhance its usefulness for researchers, consider adding:
- An abstract or brief description of the book's content.
- Keywords related to early video game systems, Atari, or platform studies.
These additions would provide more context and improve the entry's searchability.
360-373: Valuable addition with suggestions for enhancement.The new entry for "Tempest: Geometries of Play" by Ruggill and McAllister is a great addition to the bibliography. The inclusion of both DOI and URL enhances accessibility for researchers.
To further improve the entry, consider adding:
- An abstract or brief description of the book's content.
- Keywords related to Tempest, arcade games, or specific aspects of game studies covered in the book.
These additions would provide more context and improve the entry's usefulness for researchers in game studies.
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submissions/438/presentation/A handful of pixels of blood - Transcript.md
[uncategorized] ~18-~18: Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...s difficult to get a hold on screenshots and I've primarily had to rely on video sti...(COMMA_COMPOUND_SENTENCE)
[style] ~24-~24: ‘overall structure’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ... spaces, and planes. Modes refer to the overall structure of what's visible on screen and its spe...(EN_WORDINESS_PREMIUM_OVERALL_STRUCTURE)
[uncategorized] ~26-~26: A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb ‘contrast’.
Context: ...f the screen's visual organization. In contrast construction delves deeper into the lay...(SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA)
[grammar] ~26-~26: The verb ‘help’ is used with an infinitive.
Context: ...ojection methods. These attributes help reading into technical aspects of what we see o...(ADVISE_VBG)
[style] ~26-~26: ‘in conjunction with’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ... used by looking at a painting's colors in conjunction with when and where it was painted. Planes o...(EN_WORDINESS_PREMIUM_IN_CONJUNCTION_WITH)
[style] ~32-~32: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can”.
Context: ...ic parts of a video game image are, one is able to deduct certain technological aspects. W...(BE_ABLE_TO)
[misspelling] ~34-~34: Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.
Context: ...lyses. Either they are concentrating on a images content and semantic discourses ...(EN_A_VS_AN)
[uncategorized] ~34-~34: Use a comma before ‘or’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...a images content and semantic discourses or they focus on technical aspects and des...(COMMA_COMPOUND_SENTENCE)
[grammar] ~34-~34: The article is probably missing here.
Context: ... same time. That was certainly the case in 1980s video game development. I believe that ...(IN_1990s)
[uncategorized] ~38-~38: A comma is probably missing here.
Context: ...entation without perspective. Regarding semantics we can pull up this nsfw-ish one. The a...(MISSING_COMMA_AFTER_INTRODUCTORY_PHRASE)
[grammar] ~38-~38: It looks like ‘clusters’ doesn’t match ‘a’. Did you mean “a cluster” or just “clusters”?
Context: ...t symbolic. Lastly and is an example of a clusters around a video game genre. The Boxing...(A_NNS_IN)
[style] ~40-~40: For conciseness, consider replacing this expression with an adverb.
Context: ...by a few semantic-formal elements. I'm at the moment in the process of compiling the researc...(AT_THE_MOMENT)
[typographical] ~40-~40: Consider adding a comma here.
Context: ...lopers and designers did their job. But for now they pose a semantic category, that is ...(FOR_NOW_COMMA)
[style] ~40-~40: Consider a shorter alternative to avoid wordiness.
Context: ...continue the work on the FAVR ontology, in order to teach the computer to see these element...(IN_ORDER_TO_PREMIUM)
[grammar] ~44-~44: The noun “takeaway” is spelled as one word.
Context: ...emes. I believe this to be an important take away for this conference. Algorithms don't m...(TAKEAWAY)
[style] ~44-~44: The phrase “a variety of” may be wordy. To make your writing clearer, consider replacing it.
Context: ...ital objects means looking at them from a variety of perspectives, in a multiplicity of form...(A_VARIETY_OF)
[typographical] ~44-~44: Consider adding a comma here.
Context: ...rspectives, in a multiplicity of forms, and of course their context. By combining historical...(OF_COURSE_COMMA)
[style] ~46-~46: Consider an alternative adjective to strengthen your wording.
Context: ...sual examination, I believe we can gain deeper insights into the evolution of video ga...(DEEP_PROFOUND)
[typographical] ~50-~50: Consider adding a comma here.
Context: ...s, through the application of FAVR. But for now the creation and maintaining of the dat...(FOR_NOW_COMMA)
[style] ~50-~50: The word “free” tends to be overused. Consider using an alternative wording to strengthen your writing.
Context: ...les from the datasets. If you have some free time on your hand, I'd be more than welcomin...(FREE_TIME)
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submissions/438/presentation/A handful of pixels of blood - Transcript.md (2)
1-9: LGTM: Well-structured metadata and titleThe metadata and title section is well-formatted and informative. The YAML frontmatter provides useful creation and update dates, while the title and subtitle effectively communicate the presentation's focus.
1-52: Excellent presentation transcript with minor refinementsOverall, your presentation transcript is well-structured, informative, and effectively communicates your research on video game graphics and programming practices. The content is highly relevant to the conference theme, and you've done an excellent job of explaining complex concepts like FAVR and ludemes.
The minor grammatical and stylistic suggestions provided throughout the review will help refine the transcript further. These improvements will enhance clarity and readability without altering the substance of your presentation.
Your approach of inviting collaboration and acknowledging limitations adds credibility to your work and encourages engagement from the audience. The transcript successfully balances technical depth with accessibility, making it suitable for a diverse academic audience.
Great job on preparing this comprehensive and insightful presentation!
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[uncategorized] ~18-~18: Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...s difficult to get a hold on screenshots and I've primarily had to rely on video sti...(COMMA_COMPOUND_SENTENCE)
[style] ~24-~24: ‘overall structure’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ... spaces, and planes. Modes refer to the overall structure of what's visible on screen and its spe...(EN_WORDINESS_PREMIUM_OVERALL_STRUCTURE)
[uncategorized] ~26-~26: A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb ‘contrast’.
Context: ...f the screen's visual organization. In contrast construction delves deeper into the lay...(SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA)
[grammar] ~26-~26: The verb ‘help’ is used with an infinitive.
Context: ...ojection methods. These attributes help reading into technical aspects of what we see o...(ADVISE_VBG)
[style] ~26-~26: ‘in conjunction with’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ... used by looking at a painting's colors in conjunction with when and where it was painted. Planes o...(EN_WORDINESS_PREMIUM_IN_CONJUNCTION_WITH)
[style] ~32-~32: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can”.
Context: ...ic parts of a video game image are, one is able to deduct certain technological aspects. W...(BE_ABLE_TO)
[misspelling] ~34-~34: Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.
Context: ...lyses. Either they are concentrating on a images content and semantic discourses ...(EN_A_VS_AN)
[uncategorized] ~34-~34: Use a comma before ‘or’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...a images content and semantic discourses or they focus on technical aspects and des...(COMMA_COMPOUND_SENTENCE)
[grammar] ~34-~34: The article is probably missing here.
Context: ... same time. That was certainly the case in 1980s video game development. I believe that ...(IN_1990s)
[uncategorized] ~38-~38: A comma is probably missing here.
Context: ...entation without perspective. Regarding semantics we can pull up this nsfw-ish one. The a...(MISSING_COMMA_AFTER_INTRODUCTORY_PHRASE)
[grammar] ~38-~38: It looks like ‘clusters’ doesn’t match ‘a’. Did you mean “a cluster” or just “clusters”?
Context: ...t symbolic. Lastly and is an example of a clusters around a video game genre. The Boxing...(A_NNS_IN)
[style] ~40-~40: For conciseness, consider replacing this expression with an adverb.
Context: ...by a few semantic-formal elements. I'm at the moment in the process of compiling the researc...(AT_THE_MOMENT)
[typographical] ~40-~40: Consider adding a comma here.
Context: ...lopers and designers did their job. But for now they pose a semantic category, that is ...(FOR_NOW_COMMA)
[style] ~40-~40: Consider a shorter alternative to avoid wordiness.
Context: ...continue the work on the FAVR ontology, in order to teach the computer to see these element...(IN_ORDER_TO_PREMIUM)
[grammar] ~44-~44: The noun “takeaway” is spelled as one word.
Context: ...emes. I believe this to be an important take away for this conference. Algorithms don't m...(TAKEAWAY)
[style] ~44-~44: The phrase “a variety of” may be wordy. To make your writing clearer, consider replacing it.
Context: ...ital objects means looking at them from a variety of perspectives, in a multiplicity of form...(A_VARIETY_OF)
[typographical] ~44-~44: Consider adding a comma here.
Context: ...rspectives, in a multiplicity of forms, and of course their context. By combining historical...(OF_COURSE_COMMA)
[style] ~46-~46: Consider an alternative adjective to strengthen your wording.
Context: ...sual examination, I believe we can gain deeper insights into the evolution of video ga...(DEEP_PROFOUND)
[typographical] ~50-~50: Consider adding a comma here.
Context: ...s, through the application of FAVR. But for now the creation and maintaining of the dat...(FOR_NOW_COMMA)
[style] ~50-~50: The word “free” tends to be overused. Consider using an alternative wording to strengthen your writing.
Context: ...les from the datasets. If you have some free time on your hand, I'd be more than welcomin...(FREE_TIME)
submissions/438/index.qmd (5)
20-20: Improved clarity in abstract.The replacement of "mere" with "simply" enhances the readability of the sentence. This change maintains the intended meaning while making the text more accessible to readers.
26-26: Updated date field for automatic modification tracking.The change from a static date to "date-modified: last-modified" is a good practice. This will ensure that the modification date is always current without manual updates.
44-44: More accurate description of game setting.The replacement of "raging city" with "hazardous city" provides a more precise description of the game environment in Final Fight. This change enhances the accuracy of the text while maintaining an appropriate academic tone.
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1-52: Overall assessment: Improvements in clarity and accuracy.The changes made to this document enhance its clarity, accuracy, and currency. The abstract has been refined for better readability, the date field has been updated for automatic tracking, the game description has been made more precise, and the ontology reference has been updated to the latest version. These modifications contribute positively to the academic quality of the document.
52-52: Updated reference to newer ontology version.The reference has been updated from "@demleitnerThgieFavrontologyAlpha2023" to "@demleitnerThgieFavrontologyFAVR2024", reflecting a newer version of the ontology. This change ensures the most current work is cited.
Please run the following script to verify the updated reference:
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submissions/438/references.bib (8)
16-29: Excellent addition to the bibliography.This new entry for "Distant Viewing" by Arnold and Tilton is comprehensive and relevant to the field of digital media studies. The inclusion of detailed metadata, including keywords and an abstract, enhances its value for researchers.
41-54: Valuable addition to the bibliography.The new entry for "AMNESIA REMEMBERED" by Aycock is well-structured and provides comprehensive metadata. The inclusion of a DOI and URL enhances accessibility, which is particularly useful for digital research.
56-69: Well-documented addition to the bibliography.The new entry for "The Philosophy of Software" by Berry is comprehensive and highly relevant to software studies and digital media philosophy. The detailed abstract and keywords provide valuable context for researchers.
155-166: Relevant addition to the bibliography.The new entry for "Image Objects" by Gaboury is well-structured and provides valuable information on the history of computer graphics. The inclusion of an abstract offers a clear overview of the book's content, which is beneficial for researchers in this field.
97-108: Timely update to the FAVR+ ontology entry.The updates to the "Thgie/Favr-Ontology: FAVR+" entry by Demleitner reflect the ongoing development of this software. The new DOI, URL, and version information ensure that researchers can access the most current version of this ontology for video game analysis.
111-123: Valuable update to the Ludens Image Corpus entry.The updates to the "Thgie/Ludens-Image-Corpus: Initial Release" entry by Demleitner provide more specific information about this dataset of Swiss video game screenshots. The new title, DOI, and version information ensure that researchers can accurately cite and access this valuable resource for video game studies.
125-137: Excellent addition of the VHS Dataset entry.The new entry for "Thgie/Vhs-Dataset: Cluster Labels and Descriptions" by Demleitner is well-documented and provides comprehensive information about this dataset. The detailed abstract offers clear insights into the dataset's content and recent updates, which will be valuable for researchers working with video game categorization and analysis.
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1-418: Overall excellent update to the bibliography.The changes to this file significantly enhance the bibliography's scope and relevance to digital media studies and video game analysis. The new entries and updates align well with the PR objectives of updating the bibliography to support the presentation.
Key strengths:
- Comprehensive metadata for most new entries.
- Inclusion of recent publications (up to 2024).
- Coverage of diverse topics within game studies and digital media.
Minor suggestions for future improvements:
- Ensure all entries have abstracts and keywords where possible.
- Consider adding English translations for non-English titles.
These changes greatly improve the bibliography's usefulness for researchers in the field.
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