Suggestions to improve this text gramatically Update README.md #318
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Hello, I have three suggestions to improve this text gramatically. 1. "One of primary importance is cross-chain swaps" Correction: "One of the primary importance is cross-chain swaps" 2. "Ensure the incoming IBC packet is cryptogaphically valid" Correction: "Ensure the incoming IBC packet is cryptographically valid" 3. "Also when a contract make IBC transfer request" Correction: "Also, when a contract makes an IBC transfer request" Thanks.
📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe pull request includes updates to the documentation for the IBC-hooks module, focusing on correcting minor grammatical errors and enhancing clarity. Key phrases were revised for correctness, while the overall content structure and technical explanations remained unchanged. The execution flow section was clarified, and the integrity of the module's logic and functionality was preserved, including descriptions of IBC packet handling and async callback mechanisms. Changes
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[style] ~10-~10: As an alternative to the over-used intensifier ‘extremely’, consider replacing this phrase.
Context: ...portance is cross-chain swaps, which is an extremely powerful primitive. The mechanism enabling this...
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[uncategorized] ~187-~187: Possible missing article found.
Context: ...uld provide async callback data through memo field. - `memo['move']['async_callback...
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152-152: LGTM: Spelling correction
The spelling correction from "cryptogaphically" to "cryptographically" is accurate.
| @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ This module is copied from [osmosis](https://github.com/osmosis-labs/osmosis) an | |||
| The move hook is an IBC middleware which is used to allow ICS-20 token transfers to initiate contract calls. | |||
| This allows cross-chain contract calls, that involve token movement. | |||
| This is useful for a variety of use cases. | |||
| One of primary importance is cross-chain swaps, which is an extremely powerful primitive. | |||
| One of the primary importance is cross-chain swaps, which is an extremely powerful primitive. | |||
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Fix grammatical structure
The current phrase "One of the primary importance" is grammatically incorrect. Consider using one of these alternatives:
- "Of primary importance are cross-chain swaps"
- "One of the primary uses is cross-chain swaps"
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[style] ~10-~10: As an alternative to the over-used intensifier ‘extremely’, consider replacing this phrase.
Context: ...portance is cross-chain swaps, which is an extremely powerful primitive. The mechanism enabling this...
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| @@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ public entry fun ibc_timeout( | |||
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| Also when a contract make IBC transfer request, it should provide async callback data through memo field. | |||
| Also when a contract makes IBC transfer request, it should provide async callback data through memo field. | |||
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Complete the grammatical improvements
While the subject-verb agreement is fixed, the sentence still needs additional corrections:
-Also when a contract makes IBC transfer request
+Also, when a contract makes an IBC transfer requestThe changes add:
- A comma after "Also"
- The article "an" before "IBC"
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| Also when a contract makes IBC transfer request, it should provide async callback data through memo field. | |
| Also, when a contract makes an IBC transfer request, it should provide async callback data through memo field. |
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[uncategorized] ~187-~187: Possible missing article found.
Context: ...uld provide async callback data through memo field. - `memo['move']['async_callback...
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Hello,
I have three suggestions to improve this text gramatically.
"One of primary importance is cross-chain swaps" Correction: "One of the primary importance is cross-chain swaps"
"Ensure the incoming IBC packet is cryptogaphically valid" Correction: "Ensure the incoming IBC packet is cryptographically valid"
"Also when a contract make IBC transfer request" Correction: "Also, when a contract makes an IBC transfer request"
Thanks.
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