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 = Objective
 #TODO[ // Remove this block
   *Proposal Objective*
-  - What are the main goals of your thesis? 
-  - Ideally this section starts with a short overview where you state the goals with short enumerated bulletpoints, i.e. 1., 2., 3., ...
-  - Then, the section has a sub section for each goal (repeating the bulletpoint before to stay consistent) which is at least two paragraphs long and describes the goal in more detail
+  - Define the main goals of your thesis clearly and concisely.
+  - Start with a short overview where you enumerate the goals as bullet points, using action-oriented phrasing (e.g., 1., 2., 3., ...).
+  - Avoid the gerund form for verbs (e.g., "Developing Feature XYZ") and noun phrases (e.g., "Feature XYZ Development"). Instead, use action-oriented language such as "Develop Feature XYZ", similar to how you would formulate use cases in UML use case diagrams.
+  - Ensure your goals are concrete and specific, avoiding generic statements. Clearly state what you aim to achieve.
+  - Expand on each goal in a dedicated subsection. Repeat the corresponding enumerated bullet point number to maintain consistency and provide at least two paragraphs explaining the goal. Focus on being precise and specific in your descriptions.
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