rephrase a little bit in the about the blog

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-I use the blog site to share my thoughts and some notes. 
-The main site is designed for more general audience, so I will post random thoughts and short un-systematic notes with tags here. 
-For accurate expressions, some blogs will be presented in my native language Chinese. 
-But I will try to use English as much as possible, at least for tech notes. 
-You can check them with <a href="https://minhuanli.github.io/">Home</a> or <a href="https://minhuanli.github.io/archive/">Archive</a> tab in the sidebar. 
+I utilize the blog site to share my reflections and various notes. The primary site is tailored for a broader audience, where I publish spontaneous musings and concise, informal notes with appropriate tags. To ensure precision, certain blog posts will be presented in my native language, Chinese. However, I make an effort to use English, particularly for technical notes. 
+You can check them with <a href="https://minhuanli.github.io/">Home</a> or <a href="https://minhuanli.github.io/archive/">Archive</a> tabs in the sidebar. 
 
-I have also constructed another notes site, which hosts more specific and systematic notes about academic topics I learned from courses, talks or discussions. 
-I choose a <a href="https://github.com/clayh53/tufte-jekyll">Tufte</a> theme for that site, as I think a side note format is more than helpful to illustrate complex theoretic conceptions. 
-You can go there through the <a href="https://minhuanli.github.io/notes/">Notes</a> tab on sidebar.  
+Furthermore, I've established a separate notes site dedicated to more specialized and organized annotations on academic subjects gleaned from courses, lectures, and discussions. I opted for a <a href="https://github.com/clayh53/tufte-jekyll">Tufte</a> theme for this site, as I believe the side note format is exceptionally beneficial for elucidating intricate theoretical concepts. You can navigate to this site via the <a href="https://minhuanli.github.io/notes/">Notes</a> tab on sidebar.