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docs/general/decentralized-voices.md

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 The Decentralized Voices program for {{ polkadot: Polkadot :polkadot }}{{ kusama: Kusama :kusama }}
 empowers broader community participation in [Polkadot OpenGov](../learn/learn-polkadot-opengov.md)
-by delegating {{ polkadot: 42 Million DOT :polkadot }}{{ kusama: 180,000 KSM :kusama }} of voting power. Interested
-applicants can fill
-[**this application form**](https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSeIFOhMfoqRoeYqr1c_-UeB2a6u0YEsi9CaNEEeUAXtN0oE3w/viewform)
-to qualify for receiving
-[voting delegations](../learn/learn-polkadot-opengov.md#multirole-delegation) from the Web3
-Foundation. For more detailed information, see
-[the original Medium article](https://medium.com/web3foundation/decentralized-voices-program-93623c27ae43).
+by [delegating](../learn/learn-polkadot-opengov.md#multirole-delegation)
+{{ polkadot: 42 Million DOT :polkadot }}{{ kusama: 180,000 KSM :kusama }} of voting power.
+
+## Decentralized Voting Power
 
 Building on the success of previous initiatives like
 [the Thousand Validators Program](./thousand-validators.md) and
 [the Decentralized Futures Program](./decentralized-futures.md), Web3 Foundation is working on
-decentralizing governance within the Polkadot ecosystem to ensure a fair
-decision-making process. In line with the Foundation's ethos, this program seeks to amplify the voices of
-passionate and knowledgeable participants who may lack significant
+decentralizing governance within the Polkadot ecosystem to ensure a fair decision-making process. In
+line with the Foundation's ethos, this program seeks to amplify the voices of passionate and
+knowledgeable participants who may lack significant
 {{ polkadot: DOT :polkadot }}{{ kusama: KSM :kusama }} holdings, aiming to mitigate potential
 marginalization. This initiative does not impact existing programs like the Thousand Validators
 Programme, as
 [the tokens allocated can be used for both staking and governance](../learn/learn-polkadot-opengov.md#voluntary-locking-conviction-voting).
 
+## How to Apply
+
+Please fill out
+[this application](https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSeIFOhMfoqRoeYqr1c_-UeB2a6u0YEsi9CaNEEeUAXtN0oE3w/viewform)
+and we will respond shortly. Information requested includes the following:
+
+- The {{ polkadot: Polkadot :polkadot }}{{ kusama: Kusama :kusama }} address to which you would like
+  to have {{ polkadot: DOT :polkadot }}{{ kusama: KSM :kusama }} delegated. This account must have a
+  verified identity, including at least one of the following fields: X (formerly Twitter), Matrix
+  (Element), or email.
+- A link to a _publicly accessible_ declaration of your Polkadot “political philosophy” and/or
+  agenda on the [Polkadot Forum](https://forum.polkadot.network/). This can include an actual
+  philosophical statement, analogies to other political philosophies, opinions on previous Referenda
+  or governance decisions, or any other way you would like to explain to people how you would vote
+  in the future. This should be at least one paragraph.
+- A description of why you would be a good choice for this program. This can include such
+  information as previous votes (including votes with other accounts if you can prove you own them),
+  as well as commentary, blog posts, etc. on Polkadot OpenGov or specific referenda. It can also
+  include other information that you would consider relevant to decision making, e.g. being part of
+  other political groups or legislative bodies.
+
 The Decentralized Voices program initially designates delegates who will be receiving delegated
-funds. Participants are encouraged to showcase their governance contributions and political
-philosophy through public declarations and active engagement on relevant platforms such as:
+funds. In addition to the platforms mentioned above, to expand their reach, participants can
+showcase their governance contributions and political philosophy through public declarations and
+active engagement on other social media platforms such as:
 
-- [The Polkadot Forum](https://forum.polkadot.network/)
-- [X (formerly Twitter)](https://twitter.com/)
 - [Reddit](https://www.reddit.com/r/Polkadot/)
 - [Discord](https://discord.gg/polkadot)
 - [Subsocial](https://polkaverse.com/)
 
-Selection criteria include demonstrated participation in governance activities and ethical voting
-practices. Delegations are subject to review, and non-compliance may result in revocation.
+Delegations are subject to review, and non-compliance may result in revocation.
 
 The Decentralized Voices program commenced on **February 6, 2024**, offering an opportunity for
-dedicated community members to shape the future of the Polkadot ecosystem.
+dedicated community members to shape the future of the Polkadot ecosystem. For more detailed
+information, see
+[the original Medium article](https://medium.com/web3foundation/decentralized-voices-program-93623c27ae43).