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diff --git a/gatsby-config.js b/gatsby-config.js
@@ -718,13 +718,13 @@ module.exports = {
                         title: "iOS",
                         path: "/resources/migration/ios",
                         pages: [{
-                                title: "Migrate to 3.x SDKs",
-                                path: "/resources/migration/ios/migrate-to-3x"
-                            },
-                            {
                                 title: "Migrate to 4.x SDKs",
                                 path: "/resources/migration/ios/migrate-to-4x"
-                            }
+                            },
+                            {
+                                title: "Migrate to 3.x SDKs",
+                                path: "/resources/migration/ios/migrate-to-3x"
+                            },                            
                         ]
                     }
                 ]

diff --git a/src/pages/resources/faq.md b/src/pages/resources/faq.md
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ Implementing push notification tracking and measurement with the SDK depends on
 
 ## Migrating to Android Mobile Core 2.x and compatible extensions
 
-See the frequently asked questions for migration [here](../resources/migration/android/migrate-to-2x.md#frequently-asked-questions)
+See the frequently asked questions for migration [here](../resources/migration/android/migrate-to-2x.md#frequently-asked-questions).
 
 ## Lifecycle
 

diff --git a/src/pages/resources/migration/android/migrate-to-2x.md b/src/pages/resources/migration/android/migrate-to-2x.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 import Tabs from './tabs/migrate-to-2x.md'
 
-# Migrate to Adobe Experience Platform Mobile 2.x SDKs for Android
+# Migrate to Adobe Experience Platform 2.x SDKs for Android
 
 <InlineAlert variant="info" slots="text"/>
 
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ dependencies {
 }
 ```
 
-Save the `build.gradle` file and select `Sync Project with Gradle Files` in Android Studio to download the 2.x SDKs
+Save the `build.gradle` file and select `Sync Project with Gradle Files` in Android Studio to download the 2.x SDKs.
 
 #### Manual library import
 
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ Kotlin
 
 ## Update outdated API references
 
-Some of the APIs available in previous major versions of the Mobile SDK for Android are now deprecated or removed. You can choose to replace the obsolete APIs in your code with the alternative APIs in the 2.x version, as described below:
+Some of the APIs available in previous major versions of the Mobile SDK for Android are now deprecated or removed. You can choose to replace the obsolete APIs in your code with the alternative APIs in the 2.x version, as described below.
 
 <InlineAlert variant="info" slots="text"/>
 
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ The `registerExtension` API for each extension is deprecated in the 2.x version
 
 | Removed API | Alternative API |
 | :------------- | :-------------- |
-| CampaignClassic.registerDevice | The [CampaignClassic.registerDevice](../../../solution/adobe-campaign-classic/api-reference.md) API, no longer provides a callback method for registration status since a `false` value cannot be accurately used as a signal to retry requests. |
+| CampaignClassic.registerDevice | The [CampaignClassic.registerDevice](../../../solution/adobe-campaign-classic/api-reference.md) API no longer provides a callback method for registration status since a `false` value cannot be accurately used as a signal to retry requests. |
 
 ### Places Service
 

diff --git a/src/pages/resources/migration/android/tabs/migrate-to-2x.md b/src/pages/resources/migration/android/tabs/migrate-to-2x.md
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 ```java
 public class MainApp extends Application {
-    private static final String ENVIRONMENT_FILE_ID = "ENVIRONMENT_FILE_ID";
+    private static final String ENVIRONMENT_FILE_ID = "<your_environment_file_id>";
 
     @Override
     public void onCreate() {
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ public class MainApp extends Application {
         extensions.add(Assurance.EXTENSION);
         extensions.add(Identity.EXTENSION);
         MobileCore.registerExtensions(extensions, o -> {
-            Log.d(LOG_TAG, "AEP Mobile SDK is initialized");
+            Log.d(LOG_TAG, "Adobe Experience Platform Mobile SDK is initialized");
         });
 }
 }
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ public class MainApp extends Application {
 
 ```kotlin
 class MyApp : Application() {
-    val ENVIRONMENT_FILE_ID = "ENVIRONMENT_FILE_ID"
+    val ENVIRONMENT_FILE_ID = "<your_environment_file_id>"
 
     override fun onCreate() {
         super.onCreate()
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ class MyApp : Application() {
             Assurance.EXTENSION
             )
         MobileCore.registerExtensions(extensions) {
-            Log.d(LOG_TAG, "AEP Mobile SDK is initialized")
+            Log.d(LOG_TAG, "Adobe Experience Platform Mobile SDK is initialized")
         }
     }
 }

diff --git a/src/pages/resources/migration/ios/migrate-to-3x.md b/src/pages/resources/migration/ios/migrate-to-3x.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 import Tabs from './tabs/migrate-to-3x.md'
 
-# Migrate to Adobe Experience Platform 3.x Mobile SDKs for iOS
+# Migrate to Adobe Experience Platform 3.x SDKs for iOS
 
 <InlineAlert variant="info" slots="text"/>
 
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ If you are manually importing SDK libraries, ensure you identify all currently u
 If you are using CocoaPods to manage your Adobe Experience Platform Mobile SDK dependencies, the following example shows you how to switch ACP-prefix libraries to AEP-prefix libraries in your `Podfile`.
 
 ```ruby
-# replace ACPCore with AEPCore/AEPLifecycle/AEPIdentity/AEPSignal
+# replace ACPCore with AEPCore, AEPLifecycle, AEPIdentity and AEPSignal
 # pod 'ACPCore'
   pod 'AEPCore', '~> 3.0'
   pod 'AEPLifecycle', '~> 3.0'
@@ -97,14 +97,14 @@ The following code snippets show the new and correct initialization code require
 
 <TabsBlock orientation="horizontal" slots="heading, content" repeat="2"/>
 
-Objective-C
-
-<Tabs query="lang=obj-c"/>
-
 Swift
 
 <Tabs query="lang=swift"/>
 
+Objective-C
+
+<Tabs query="lang=obj-c"/>
+
 ## Update outdated API references
 
 Finally, you'll need to scan through your current implementation and replace ACP-prefix API calls to the new Swift-based, AEP-prefix libraries. A quick find and replace should do the trick. Detailed API changes by extension may be found at the links below.

diff --git a/src/pages/resources/migration/ios/migrate-to-4x.md b/src/pages/resources/migration/ios/migrate-to-4x.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 import Tabs from './tabs/migrate-to-4x.md'
 
-# Migrate to Adobe Experience Platform Mobile 4.x SDKs for iOS
+# Migrate to Adobe Experience Platform 4.x SDKs for iOS
 
 <InlineAlert variant="info" slots="text"/>
 
@@ -84,10 +84,10 @@ The following APIs have been removed:
 
 <TabsBlock orientation="horizontal" slots="heading, content" repeat="2"/>
 
-AEP 3.x
+iOS 3.x
 
 <Tabs query="platform=ios&extension=edge&version=3"/>
 
-AEP 4.x
+iOS 4.x
 
 <Tabs query="platform=ios&extension=edge&version=4"/>
diff --git a/src/pages/resources/migration/ios/tabs/migrate-to-3x.md b/src/pages/resources/migration/ios/tabs/migrate-to-3x.md
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
       const UIApplicationState appState = application.applicationState;
       [AEPMobileCore setLogLevel: AEPLogLevelDebug];
       [AEPMobileCore registerExtensions:@[AEPMobileSignal.class, AEPMobileLifecycle.class, AEPMobileUserProfile.class, AEPMobileIdentity.class, AEPMobileAssurance.class] completion:^{
-        [AEPMobileCore configureWithAppId: @""];
+        [AEPMobileCore configureWithAppId: @"<your_environment_file_id>"];
         if (appState != UIApplicationStateBackground) {
           // only start lifecycle if the application is not in the background
           [AEPMobileCore lifecycleStart:@{@"contextDataKey": @"contextDataVal"}];
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ import AEPUserProfile
 func application(_ application: UIApplication, didFinishLaunchingWithOptions launchOptions: [UIApplication.LaunchOptionsKey: Any]?) -> Bool {
     let appState = application.applicationState
     MobileCore.registerExtensions([Signal.self, Lifecycle.self, UserProfile.self, Identity.self, Assurance.self], {
-        MobileCore.configureWith(appId: "")
+        MobileCore.configureWith(appId: "<your_environment_file_id>")
         if appState != .background {
           // only start lifecycle if the application is not in the background
           MobileCore.lifecycleStart(additionalContextData: ["contextDataKey": "contextDataVal"])