Merge pull request #37652 from Expensify/jamesdeanexpensify-patch-1

Update PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx

src/pages/OnboardEngagement/ManageTeamsExpensesPage.tsx

@@ -26,14 +26,13 @@ const menuIcons = {
 
 // This is not translated because it is a message coming from concierge, which only supports english
 const messageCopy =
-    "Great! To manage your team's expenses, create a workspace to keep everything contained:\n" +
+    "Here's how to manage your team's expenses:\n" +
     '\n' +
-    '1. Press your avatar icon\n' +
-    '2. Choose Workspaces\n' +
-    '3. Choose New Workspace\n' +
-    '4. Name your workspace something meaningful (eg, "Galaxy Food Inc.")\n' +
+    '1. Click the green *+* > *New workspace*.\n' +
+    '2. Your new workspace is now active.\n' +
+    '3. To update your workspace name, click *Profile* > *Name*.\n' +
     '\n' +
-    'Once you have your workspace set up, you can invite your team to it via the Members pane and connect a business bank account to reimburse them!';
+    'Next, click *Members* to invite your team to your workspace, then add your business bank account to reimburse them!';
 
 function ManageTeamsExpensesModal() {
     const styles = useThemeStyles();

src/pages/OnboardEngagement/PurposeForUsingExpensifyPage.tsx

@@ -23,44 +23,40 @@ import SCREENS from '@src/SCREENS';
 // This is not translated because it is a message coming from concierge, which only supports english
 const messageCopy = {
     [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.TRACK]:
-        'Great! To track your expenses, I suggest you create a workspace to keep everything contained:\n' +
+        "Here's how to start tracking business spend for taxes:\n" +
         '\n' +
-        '1. Press your avatar icon\n' +
-        '2. Choose Workspaces\n' +
-        '3. Choose New Workspace\n' +
-        '4. Name your workspace something meaningful (eg, "My Business Expenses")\n' +
+        '1. Click the green *+* > *New workspace*.\n' +
+        '2. Your new workspace is now active.\n' +
+        '3. To update your workspace name, click *Profile* > *Name*.\n' +
         '\n' +
-        'Once you have your workspace set up, you can add expenses to it as follows:\n' +
+        'Next, start adding expenses to your workspace:\n' +
         '\n' +
-        '1. Choose My Business Expenses (or whatever you named it) in the list of chat rooms\n' +
-        '2. Choose the + button in the chat compose window\n' +
-        '3. Choose Request money\n' +
-        "4. Choose what kind of expense you'd like to log, whether a manual expense, scanned receipt, or tracked distance.\n" +
+        '1. Click the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' +
+        '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' +
+        '3. Choose your workspace as the destination.\n' +
         '\n' +
-        "That'll be stored in your My Business Expenses room for your later access. Thanks for asking, and let me know how it goes!",
+        'Be sure to track all of your expenses in your new workspace to keep everything organized. Let me know how it goes!',
     [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.SUBMIT]:
-        'Hi there, to submit expenses for reimbursement, please:\n' +
+        "Here's how to submit expenses for reimbursement:\n" +
         '\n' +
-        '1. Press the big green + button\n' +
-        '2. Choose Request money\n' +
-        '3. Indicate how much to request, either manually, by scanning a receipt, or by tracking distance\n' +
-        '4. Enter the email address or phone number of your boss\n' +
+        '1. Click the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' +
+        '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' +
+        "3. Enter your reimburser's email or phone number.\n" +
         '\n' +
-        "And we'll take it from there to get you paid back. Please give it a shot and let me know how it goes!",
+        "And we'll take it from there to get you paid back. Give it a shot and let me know how it goes!",
     [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.MANAGE_TEAM]: '',
     [CONST.INTRO_CHOICES.CHAT_SPLIT]:
-        'Hi there, to split an expense such as with a friend, please:\n' +
+        "Here's how to split expenses with friends:\n" +
         '\n' +
-        '1. Press the big green + button\n' +
-        '2. Choose *Request money*\n' +
-        '3. Indicate how much was spent, either manually, by scanning a receipt, or by tracking distance\n' +
-        '4. Enter the email address or phone number of your friend\n' +
-        '5. Press *Split* next to their name\n' +
-        '6. Repeat as many times as you like for each of your friends\n' +
-        '7. Press *Add to split* when done adding friends\n' +
-        '8. Press Split to split the bill\n' +
+        '1. Tap the green *+* > *Request money*.\n' +
+        '2. Add an expense or scan a receipt.\n' +
+        "3. Enter your friend's email or phone number.\n" +
+        '4. Tap *Split* next to their contact info.\n' +
+        '5. Repeat for any additional friends.\n' +
+        "6. Tap *Add to split* when you're done.\n" +
+        '7. Review and tap *Split* to send your request(s).\n' +
         '\n' +
-        "This will send a money request to each of your friends for however much they owe you, and we'll take care of getting you paid back. Thanks for asking, and let me know how it goes!",
+        "We'll send a money request to each of your friends and make sure you get paid back. Let me know how it goes!",
 };
 
 const menuIcons = {