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HannesGitH · Apr 1, 2024 · 3cab933 · 3cab933
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diff --git a/src/lib/data/education.ts b/src/lib/data/education.ts
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ export interface EducationEntry {
 }
 //all times need to have the same length
 const allEducation:EducationEntry[] = [
-    { year: 2017, degree: 'Abitur', gpa:2.0, place: 'Werner von Siemens Gymnasium Berlin', location:'Berlin, DE', description:'with primary focus on mathmatics and physics, with 15points (the best) in computer science ;)'},
-    { year: 2020, degree: 'B.Sc.', gpa:2.6, place: 'Freie Universität Berlin', location:'Berlin, DE', name:'Computer Science', description:'I wrote my bachelor thesis on improving useability of an email client'},
+    { year: 2017, degree: 'Abitur', gpa:2.0, place: 'Werner von Siemens Gymnasium Berlin', location:'Berlin, DE', description:'With primary focus on mathmatics and physics, with 15points (the best) in computer science ;)'},
+    { year: 2020, degree: 'B.Sc.', gpa:2.6, place: 'Freie Universität Berlin', location:'Berlin, DE', name:'Computer Science', description:'I wrote my bachelor thesis on improving useability of an email client.'},
     { year: 2023, degree: 'M.Sc.', gpa:'expecting ~1.4', place: 'Freie Universität Berlin', location:'Berlin, DE', name:'Computer Science', description:'I\'ve not yet got my degree, but i\'ve already finished all my classes and my masters thesis called "Improved linear Cryptanalysis on Quantum Computers" with a 1.0, I therefor expect to graduate with a 1.4 very soon.'}
 ];
 

diff --git a/src/lib/data/experience.ts b/src/lib/data/experience.ts
@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ const options: ExperienceEntry[] = [
 		name: 'Software Engineer (Internship)',
 		description:
 			[
-                'designed and built a new landing page for the company website, mostly using PHP and plain JS',
-                'helping to build a new web app for the company using Nuxt.js (Vue.js) and MongoDB, though to be honest, i forgot most of that already',
+                'Designed and built a new landing page for the company website, mostly using PHP and plain JS.',
+                'Helping to build a new web app for the company using Nuxt.js (Vue.js) and MongoDB, though to be honest, i forgot most of that already..',
             ]
 	},
     {
@@ -30,18 +30,18 @@ const options: ExperienceEntry[] = [
 		name: 'Studentische Hilfskraft',
 		description:
 			[
-                'did a lot of research regarding quantum computing and quantum algorithms, code wasn\'t really the main part of the job, but i did a bunch of python using IBM\'s qiskit framework',
+                'Did a lot of research regarding quantum computing and quantum algorithms with a focus on quantum cryptanalysis, code wasn\'t really the main part of the job, but i did a bunch of python using IBM\'s qiskit framework.',
             ]
 	},
 	{
         start: 2021,
 		year: '2024',
 		place: 'Mastbau FN GmbH',
 		location: 'Berlin, DE',
-		name: 'lead Full-Stack Developer',
+		name: 'Lead Full-Stack Developer',
 		description:
 			[
-                'designed and built an internal application for managing the company\'s projects, using primarily Flutter'
+                'Designed and built an internal application for managing the company\'s projects, using primarily Flutter.'
             ]
 	},
 	//TODO: sobald carii gegründet wird

diff --git a/src/lib/data/projects-raw.ts b/src/lib/data/projects-raw.ts
@@ -30,15 +30,15 @@ export const inspectionR = {
     name: 'Mastbau-FN GmbH, Team of 2',
     pdfName: 'Inspector',
     pdfDescriptionDE: ['Ein Inspektions-Tool für Baustellen', 'Speziell entwickelt für die Mastbau-FN GmbH' ,'Geschrieben in Flutter und TypeScript'],
-    pdfDescription: ['An inspection tool for construction sites', 'Specially developed for Mastbau-FN GmbH', 'Written in Flutter and TypeScript'],
+    pdfDescription: ['An inspection tool for construction sites', 'Specially developed for Mastbau-FN GmbH', 'Written using Flutter and TypeScript'],
     link: 'https://github.com/mastbau-fn/inspector',
 }
 
 export const cariiR = {
     // year: '2024',
     pdfName: 'Carii',
     pdfDescriptionDE: ['Eine DiPA, WIP', 'Primär geschrieben in Flutter, mit supabase und postgresql als Backend'],
-    pdfDescription: ['A DiPA, WIP', 'Primarily written in Flutter, with supabase and postgresql as backend'],
+    pdfDescription: ['A DiPA, WIP', 'Primarily written using Flutter, with supabase and postgresql as backend'],
     link: 'https://carii.de',
     name: 'Group of ~5',
 }