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Hyperlint Summary Review for PR

Metrics

Metric	Description	Value
Writing Quality Rating	The rating from 1 to 10 of the writing quality of the content. (Mean)	4.5
High (🔥) Severity Issues	Number of high severity issues we idenitfied. (Sum)	2
SEO Rating	The rating from 1 to 10 of the SEO quality of the document. (Mean)	8.0
Readability Score	(ARI) Score (Mean)	5.68

Hyperlint Review for README.md

Review of the Content

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We rate this content quality as a 5/10.
To improve the writing quality, focus on using active voice consistently and ensuring concise and clear sentences. Pay attention to spelling and grammar errors. Maintain a consistent tone throughout the text.

• Inconsistency in Capitalization (medium Severity) Change 'demo' to 'Demo' for consistency.

- -# demo 
+ -# Demo

• Passive Voice (medium Severity) Change to active voice for clarity and directness.

- This chnge only exists to be able to show off what a review looks like and what kind of information you should expect back from a review. 
+ This change demonstrates what a review looks like and the information you should expect to receive.

Hyperlint Review for getting-started-with-python.md

Review of the Content

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We classified this document as a tutorial and reviewed it accordingly. We rate this content quality as a 4/10.
To improve the writing quality, ensure that the steps are in sequential order, use active voice consistently, and provide clear and concise instructions. Avoid colloquial language that may not be professional or inclusive. Ensure that headings are informative and reflect the content of the sections. Address grammatical errors and improve the flow of the document.

Overall outline and structure feedback

In Some Big Title (medium Severity)

The main title is too vague and does not inform the reader about the content of the document. Try replacing it with Getting Started with Python Programming.

In Some Subtitle (medium Severity)

The subtitle is too generic and does not provide additional context or information. Try replacing it with A Beginner's Guide to Writing Python Code.

In This is renaming (medium Severity)

The heading is unclear and does not convey the purpose of the section. Try replacing it with Refactoring Your Python Code.

with respect to the content

In the section Step 2: Write Your First Python Program, we identified 1 issue.

• Colloquial and unprofessional language (high Severity) Replace with more professional language that maintains an inclusive tone.

- Now you can run that file all by yourself because you're a big boy! 
+ Now you can execute the file on your own.

In the section Step 4: Write a Basic Function, we identified 1 issue.

• Missing step in sequence (high Severity) Add the missing Step 3 or renumber the steps appropriately.

- Step 4: Write a Basic Function 
+ Step 3: Write a Basic Function

In the section This is renaming, we identified 2 issues.

• Vague and uninformative heading (medium Severity) Change the heading to accurately reflect the content of the section.

- This is renaming 
+ Refactoring Your Python Code

• Repetitive and unclear text (medium Severity) Rewrite the section to clearly convey the intended message without repetition.

- This is another section that contains text. This is something else. This is a change that I am proposing. Here's a change again. 
+ In this section, we will discuss proposed changes to enhance your Python code.

In the section Conclusion, we identified 1 issue.

• Repetitive and vague language (medium Severity) Rewrite the conclusion to summarize the key points learned in a clear and concise manner.

- In conclusion, you've learned more about python and are now ready to do more things with python because you learned. 
+ In conclusion, you have successfully written a basic Python program and function, setting the foundation for further Python development.

SEO Review & Feedback

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Overall we give this article an SEO rating of 8/10. To provide a beginner's guide to writing Python programs with clear steps and explanations.

We estimate that this article is going to target the following keywords:

• Python programming
• Front Matter
• Technical Documentation

Title Feedback

We think you might want to change the title of this document.
The proposed title is more specific and includes the main topic 'Python Programming' for better SEO and user understanding.

- Some Front Matter
+ Introduction to Python Programming: A Beginner's Guide

Heading / Outline Feedback

The headings can be improved by including relevant keywords like 'Python Programming' to enhance SEO. Additionally, using more descriptive headings can improve user understanding and engagement with the content.
You should consider making the following heading changes:

- Some Big Title
+ Introduction to Python Programming

(The proposed heading is more descriptive and includes a relevant keyword 'Python Programming' for better SEO.)

- This is renaming
+ Renaming in Python Programming

(The proposed heading is more specific and includes the keyword 'Python Programming' for SEO purposes.)

- Conclusion
+ Summary of Python Programming Steps

(The proposed heading is more descriptive and includes the keyword 'Python Programming' for SEO.)

Readability Metrics

Metric	Value
Automated Readability Index (ARI)	Fourth grade (score: 5.68)
Long Sentences	0
Passive Voice Sentences	0