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-# Cojourney
+# Cojourney<a href="https://discord.gg/qetWd7J9De"><img style="float: right" src="https://dcbadge.vercel.app/api/server/qetWd7J9De" alt=""></a>
 
 <img src="packages/docs/static/img/banner.jpg" alt="Cojourney" width="100%">
 
-Cojourney is about making high quality connections with other people. It's a social network that's designed to help you find people who share your interests, and to help you build the right context to enable meaningful relationships.
+Cojourney is about making high quality connections with other people. It's a social network that's designed to help you find people who share your interests, and to help you build the right context.
 
-Cojourney is free and open source. At the core is a simple agent framework, written in typescript and running in a Cloudflare worker. You can access the agent from the web, app or terminal. You can even run your own agents and connect them to the network!
+# Strong connections start with friendship
+The current state of personal connection apps is not great. Making friends is strange and awkward, and it's hard to know who to trust. Dating apps are even worse, and they're not designed to help you make meaningful connections.
 
-This project is developed in the open, and you can contribute to it. We're looking for people who are passionate about building a better social network, and who are interested in the intersection of technology and human relationships. We build on Discord, here: https://discord.gg/N3XUfWSTTe
+<img src="packages/docs/static/img/cj3.jpg" alt="Cojourney" width="100%">
+
+CJ is an AI who can bridge the gap. Once she knows a bit about you she can connect you with other people in a meaningful way, providing context and commonality to help you get started. If you're not totally sure what you're looking for, she'll help you identify it, or help with what to say or how to react.
+
+If you want to try talking to CJ, you can get started right away by running:
+```sh
+npx cojourney
+```
 
 ## Installation
 
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 # API: http://localhost:7998
 ```
 
-Once you've started everything, you can talk to CJ, the default agent, by running the shell: 
+Once you've started everything, you can talk to CJ, the default agent, by opening a new terminal and running the shell: 
 ```bash
 npm run cj
-```
+```
+
+## Contributing
+
+This project is in early pre-alpha and developed in the open. If you want to make it better, you can contribute. We're looking to connect with people who are passionate about using AI to help people have stronger human relationships. We build on Discord, here: https://discord.gg/N3XUfWSTTe
+
+<img src="packages/docs/static/img/cj2.jpg" alt="Cojourney" width="100%">