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[숫자 야구 게임] 박지현 미션 제출합니다. #13

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야구 게임

for (int i = 0; i < 3; i++) {
do {
duplicate = false;
r[i] = Randoms.pickNumberInRange(1, 9);
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변수명을 좀더 명확하게 변경해주세요

import camp.nextstep.edu.missionutils.Randoms;

public class RandomNumber {
void randomNumber(int[] r){
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배열이 아닐 list를 사용해서 contains함수를 사용해보세요

int countBall(int[] r, String[] str) {
for (int i = 0; i < 3; i++) {
for (int j = 0; j < 3; j++) {
if (i != j && r[i] == Integer.parseInt(str[j])) {
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블록 들여쓰기가 너무 많으면 가독성이 떨어집니다. 메소드를 분리하거나 java 라이브러리 함수를 사용해보세요~~

public class Application {
public static void main(String[] args) {
// TODO: 프로그램 구현
Scanner scanner = new Scanner(System.in);
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scanner 말고 과제에서 제공한 라이브러리에 있는 Console.read를 사용하세요

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안쓰는 객체를 생성할 필요가 있을까요?

Scanner scanner = new Scanner(System.in);

System.out.println("숫자 야구 게임을 시작합니다.");
int[] randoms = new int[3];
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random넘버 배열을 RandomNumber에서 생성해도 될거 같아요


while (true) {
try {
System.out.print("숫자를 입력해주세요 : ");
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한 게임을 하는 기능이랑 게임을 재시작하는 기능을 분리할 수 있을거 같아요!


String answer = Console.readLine();
ExceptionHandler exceptionHandler = new ExceptionHandler();
exceptionHandler.checkValid(answer);
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예외처리 클래스를 만든것은 아주 좋은 생각이에요!!

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package baseball;

public class ExceptionHandler {
void checkValid(String answer){
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예외를 좀더 생각해보면서 다양한 경우를 생각해보세요!! 다양한 경우에 따라 메소드를 분리해보면 좀더 명확하겠죠?


if (count.getStrikes() == 3) {
System.out.println("게임을 새로 시작하려면 1, 종료하려면 2를 입력하세요.");
int option = scanner.nextInt();
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Console.read를 사용하세요

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