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Edit automation-coe-strategy.md #1632

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@zipperer zipperer commented Nov 9, 2024

Dotted green boxes indicate areas address by the ALM Accelerator.

To keep passive voice ("address by the ALM Accelerator") and make grammatical could replace address with addressed.

Instead, replace passive voice with active voice ('the ALM Accelerator addresses'). The sentence before the one I edit uses active voice ("The dotted blue boxes indicate the maturity model areas that the Automation Kit addresses"). This edit makes the voice consistent between the two.

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Dotted green boxes indicate areas address by the ALM Accelerator.
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To keep passive voice ("address by the ALM Accelerator") and make grammatical could replace `address` with `addressed`.

Instead, replace passive voice with active voice ('the ALM Accelerator addresses'). The sentence before the one I edit uses active voice ("The dotted blue boxes indicate the maturity model areas that the Automation Kit addresses"). This edit makes the voice consistent between the two.
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