adding suggested changes from ZIP review

QED-it · Nov 5, 2024 · be14d0f · be14d0f
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diff --git a/rendered/zip-0230.html b/rendered/zip-0230.html
@@ -585,7 +585,15 @@
                             <td><code>43</code></td>
                             <td><code>recipient</code></td>
                             <td><code>byte[43]</code></td>
-                            <td>The raw encoding of an Orchard Raw Payment Address, as per protocol §5.6.4.2 ‘Orchard Raw Payment Addresses’.</td>
+                            <td>The encoding of a recipient's diversified payment address, as
+                                <span class="math">\(\mathsf{LEBS2OSP}_{88}(\mathsf{d})\|
+\mathsf{LEBS2OSP}_{256}(\mathsf{repr}_{\mathbb{P}}
+(\mathsf{pk}_\mathsf{d}))\!\)</span>
+                            , where
+                                <span class="math">\(\mathsf{d}\)</span>
+                             is the diversifier and
+                                <span class="math">\(\mathsf{pk_d}\)</span>
+                             is the diversified transmission key. <strong>Non Normative Note</strong>: This is the same as the encoding of an Orchard Raw Payment Address, as defined in the protocol specification §5.6.4.2 ‘Orchard Raw Payment Addresses’.</td>
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                             <td><code>8</code></td>

diff --git a/zips/zip-0230.rst b/zips/zip-0230.rst
@@ -342,8 +342,14 @@ An issuance note, ``IssueNote`` contains the following fields:
 +-----------------------------+--------------------------+--------------------------------------+--------------------------------------------------------------------+
 | Bytes                       | Name                     | Data Type                            | Description                                                        |
 +=============================+==========================+======================================+====================================================================+
-|``43``                       |``recipient``             |``byte[43]``                          |The raw encoding of an Orchard Raw Payment Address, as              |
-|                             |                          |                                      |per protocol §5.6.4.2 ‘Orchard Raw Payment Addresses’.              |
+|``43``                       |``recipient``             |``byte[43]``                          |The encoding of a recipient's diversified payment address, as       |
+|                             |                          |                                      |:math:`\mathsf{LEBS2OSP}_{88}(\mathsf{d})\|                         |
+|                             |                          |                                      |\mathsf{LEBS2OSP}_{256}(\mathsf{repr}_{\mathbb{P}}                  |
+|                             |                          |                                      |(\mathsf{pk}_\mathsf{d}))\!`, where :math:`\mathsf{d}` is the       |
+|                             |                          |                                      |diversifier and :math:`\mathsf{pk_d}` is the diversified            |
+|                             |                          |                                      |transmission key. **Non Normative Note**: This is the same as the   |
+|                             |                          |                                      |encoding of an Orchard Raw Payment Address, as defined in the       |
+|                             |                          |                                      |protocol specification §5.6.4.2 ‘Orchard Raw Payment Addresses’.    |
 +-----------------------------+--------------------------+--------------------------------------+--------------------------------------------------------------------+
 |``8``                        |``value``                 |``uint64``                            |The amount being issued in this note.                               |
 +-----------------------------+--------------------------+--------------------------------------+--------------------------------------------------------------------+