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WalkthroughThe documentation in docs/general/join-server.md has been restructured to enhance clarity. The title now reflects both Java and Bedrock editions, and the headings have been updated to a higher hierarchy. Specific steps have been streamlined, and a new section detailing console instructions has been added—including guidance on using a third-party app with an ad warning. Changes
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User->>Doc: Open join-server.md
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Doc->>User: Display Java and Bedrock Edition (Mobile) steps
else Using Console
Doc->>User: Display Console section with third-party app guidance and warning
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33-40: Review Console Section Wording:
In the "Minecraft Bedrock Edition (Console)" section, consider the following improvements:
- Punctuation: In line 40, add a comma after "Nintendo" (e.g., "PlayStation, Xbox, and Nintendo, there is an additional step...") for improved readability.
- Consistency: The info block on line 36 refers to "Nintendo Switch," so update line 40 to use "Nintendo Switch" instead of just "Nintendo" to maintain terminology consistency.
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[uncategorized] ~40-~40: Possible missing comma found.
Context: ...in our Server on PlayStation, Xbox, and Nintendo there is an additional step. You will r...(AI_HYDRA_LEO_MISSING_COMMA)
51-56: App Affiliation Warning Clarification:
The warning block effectively informs users that BedrockTogether is a third-party application. To further enhance clarity, consider revising the phrase "not affiliated with or supported by our server" to "not affiliated with or officially endorsed by our server." This strengthens the warning and removes potential ambiguity.🧰 Tools
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[style] ~53-~53: Consider replacing this word to strengthen your wording.
Context: ...g BedrockTogether is a third-party app and is **not affiliated with or supported b...(AND_THAT)
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[uncategorized] ~40-~40: Possible missing comma found.
Context: ...in our Server on PlayStation, Xbox, and Nintendo there is an additional step. You will r...
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[style] ~53-~53: Consider replacing this word to strengthen your wording.
Context: ...g BedrockTogether is a third-party app and is **not affiliated with or supported b...
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docs/general/join-server.md (7)
11-16: Clear Info Block for Mobile:
The addition of the "Minecraft Java and Bedrock Edition (Mobile)" section along with the:::infoblock clearly communicates that these instructions apply to PC and mobile users. Ensure that the custom markdown for the info block renders correctly on all supported documentation platforms.
21-25: Step 2: Multiplayer Menu Instructions are Clear:
The "Open Minecraft and Access the Multiplayer Menu" section provides clear, step-by-step instructions. No modifications are required in this block.
26-31: Step 3: Connection Instructions:
The steps for connecting to the server are concise and straightforward. Verify that all linked instructions (such as entering the server address) align with the information provided elsewhere in the documentation.
42-45: Step 1: Download the BedrockTogether App:
The instructions for downloading the BedrockTogether app are clear and easy to follow. No changes are necessary.
46-50: Step 2: Start BedrockTogether:
The provided steps for launching and operating the BedrockTogether app are well-structured and clear.
58-64: Console Connection Steps:
The detailed instructions for connecting from a console are clear and helpful. Double-check that the reference to finding a "new world called 'BedrockTogether'" is consistent with what users see in their LAN game listings.
65-68: Final Section ("Start Playing!") Review:
The concluding section is encouraging and neatly wraps up the guide. It successfully guides users on what to expect once connected.
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