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@@ -56,8 +56,9 @@ These are some of the opportunities we see in rebooting our design system:
   platform more easily and translate previous experiences to into future ones.
 - **Efficient**: Factorial One is designed to be efficient. It should help users
   complete their tasks quickly and without friction.
-- **Enjoyable**: We want users to enjoy using Factorial. Factorial One should
-  make the platform pleasant to use.
+- **Enjoyable**: We want users to enjoy using Factorial, and Factorial One is a
+  key part of that. By providing a visually pleasing and coherent experience, we
+  can make sure users enjoy using our platform.
 
 ## Technical choices