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 		\begin{cvsubsection}{Backend Developer}{FreightAmigo Services Ltd.}{Jul 2022 -- Dec 2022}
 			\begin{itemize}
-				\item Designed and implemented APIs for website and mobile apps using PHP
+				\item Designed and implemented APIs for website and mobile apps using PHP, enhancing data retrieval speed and user experience
 				\item Achieved website loading time reduction \& improved database efficiency by optimizing logo picture storage
-				\item Utilized SQL queries for generating reports
-    				\item Actively participated in Agile processes, utilizing Jira's features to enhance team collaboration
+				\item Utilized SQL queries for generating reports, improving data accuracy and decision-making processes
+    				\item Participated in Agile processes, utilizing Jira's features to enhance team collaboration and project tracking
 			\end{itemize}
 		\end{cvsubsection}
 
 		\begin{cvsubsection}{Software Engineer}{VTech Telecommunications Ltd.}{Aug 2021 -- Jul 2022}
 			\begin{itemize}
-				\item Reduced AWS Lambda function running time by \textbf{75\%} by resources reuse
-				\item Developed serverless functions to process pre-provisioning checking of IoT devices
-				\item Utilized AWS Lambda function and DynamoDB to manage and update data stored in NoSQL databases
-				\item Automated cloud resource creation by developing and deploying Infrastructure as Code templates
-				\item Implemented AWS CloudWatch metric alarms to monitor the health of applications
+				\item Reduced AWS Lambda function running time by \textbf{75\%} by reusing existing resources and optimizing code
+				\item Developed serverless functions to process pre-provisioning checking of IoT devices, improving efficiency and reducing manual errors
+				\item Utilized AWS Lambda function and DynamoDB to manage and update data stored in NoSQL databases, ensuring data integrity and improving access speed
+				\item Automated cloud resource creation by developing and deploying Infrastructure as Code templates, reducing setup time and minimizing configuration errors
+				\item Implemented AWS CloudWatch metric alarms to monitor the health of applications, enabling prompt issue detection and resolution
 			\end{itemize}
 		\end{cvsubsection}
 
 		\begin{cvsubsection}{Survey Officer (Quantity)}{Architectural Services Dept.}{May 2019 -- Jan 2021}	
 			\begin{itemize}
-				\item Reduced time to produce financial statements by over \textbf{85\%} by building relational formulas between cells to automate the computations in Excel
+				\item Automated financial statement computations in Excel by building relational formulas between cells, reducing production time by \textbf{85\%}
 			\end{itemize}
 		\end{cvsubsection}
 	\end{cvsection}