Solution #1422
Solution #1422
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It looks like there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve the Pull Request. The typos in the hide method of the Herbivore class and the bite method of the Carnivore class need to be corrected to ensure the code functions as expected. Additionally, the logic in the bite method should be revised to handle hidden victims appropriately. Once these issues are resolved, the code will be in great shape! Keep up the good work, and don't hesitate to reach out if you need any help. 😊
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app/main.py
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| class Herbivore(Animal): | ||
| def hide(self) -> bool: | ||
| self.hidden = not self.hidden | ||
| return self.hiden |
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There is a typo in the return statement. It should be self.hidden instead of self.hiden.
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| def bite(self, victim: Herbivore) -> bool: | ||
| if isinstance(victim, Carnivore): | ||
| print('Carnivore cannot bite by another carnivore!') | ||
| elif not victim.hiden: |
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There is a typo here. It should be victim.hidden instead of victim.hiden.
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| elif victim.hidden: | ||
| victim.health = 100 |
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The logic here seems incorrect. If the victim is hidden, their health should not be reset to 100. Consider revising this logic to reflect the intended behavior when a hidden victim is bitten.
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Review Summary
Great effort on your submission! 🎉 Your code meets most of the task requirements, but there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed to enhance functionality and adhere to the task constraints:
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Carnivore Class - Bite Method: The
bitemethod currently checks if the victim is aCarnivore, which seems incorrect. It should check if the victim is aHerbivoresince carnivores typically prey on herbivores. Additionally, ensure that the method returns a boolean indicating whether the bite was successful. -
Animal Class - Alive Attribute: Ensure that the
Animal.aliveattribute only contains living animals. The current implementation does not handle the case where an animal is initialized with health less than or equal to zero, which could lead to dead animals being added toAnimal.alive. -
Printing Alive Animals: The
print_alivemethod should match the required output format. It currently returns a list of dictionaries but does not print them in the specified format. -
Code Style: Make sure all string literals use double quotes to adhere to the style guide.
Your decision to approve this Pull Request is to help you move forward with your learning journey. However, it's crucial to address these issues in future iterations to avoid similar problems. Keep up the good work, and use this feedback to refine your skills and improve your code! 🚀
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| class Carnivore(Animal): | ||
| def bite(self, victim: Herbivore) -> bool: | ||
| if isinstance(victim, Carnivore): |
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The condition isinstance(victim, Carnivore) seems incorrect for the bite method. The method should check if the victim is a Herbivore, not a Carnivore, since a carnivore should be able to bite herbivores, not other carnivores. Consider revising this condition.
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