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DOCSP-30345: Update Kotlin SDK's Update page #3059

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Update existing Update page with missing content and improved code examples using updated object models

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Readability for Commit Hash: 90bf08d

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  • source/sdk/kotlin/realm-database/schemas/relationships: Grade Level: 11.8, Reading Ease: 44.03
  • source/sdk/kotlin/realm-database/schemas/supported-types: Grade Level: 12.1, Reading Ease: 37.81
  • source/sdk/kotlin/realm-database/crud/create: Grade Level: 10.6, Reading Ease: 46.98
  • source/sdk/kotlin/realm-database/crud/delete: Grade Level: 8.2, Reading Ease: 64.2
  • source/sdk/kotlin/realm-database/crud/update: Grade Level: 11.8, Reading Ease: 38.52

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Just a couple minor suggestions! Nice work, @cbullinger!

@@ -299,6 +299,8 @@ In the following example, we instantiate a new ``Frog`` object with a
.. To learn how to increment, decrement, and set the counter value after
.. you create the object, refer to :ref:`<kotlin-update-mutablerealm>`.

.. _kotlin-create-realmany:
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"Realmany" sounds like a fantasy country. 😆

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@cbullinger cbullinger merged commit 30e51bd into mongodb:master Nov 8, 2023
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