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Tu parcial tiene varios puntos para mejorar. Está aprobado pero no es suficiente para promocionar. Saludos.

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method modificarIntensidadElevada(nuevaIntensidad) {
Emocion.cambiarIntensidadElevada(nuevaIntensidad)

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Esto no es código válido.

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No se le pueden mandar mensajes a las clases.

Emocion.cambiarIntensidadElevada(nuevaIntensidad)
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method vivirEventoEnGrupo(grupo, evento) {

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Este código no corresponde a las personas.

class Emocion {
var property intensidad
var property intensidadElevada = 50

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Debería ser única para todas las emociones.

return intensidad >= intensidadElevada
}
method cambiarIntensidadElevada(nuevaIntensidad) {

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Debería ser global a todas las emociones.

//implemento la funcion liberacionAux para no repetir return super() && condicionDeEmocion cada vez que tengo que hacer un overrite en liberarEmocion
object liberacionAux {
method puedeLiberarse(emocion, condicionAdicional) {

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Bien por la intención de no repetir, aunque hay otros mecanismos mejores.

palabrotas.remove(palabrotas.head())
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El código mal indentado dificulta la lectura.

method liberarse(evento) {
causa = evento.descripcion()
intensidad -= evento.impacto()

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Repite código (línea 57)


method liberarse(evento) {
intensidad -= evento.impacto()

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Otra vez repite.

En este caso, todas las emociones heredan de la clase Emocion, lo que permite compartir y reutilizar el comportamiento común, como la gestión de la intensidad y los eventos vividos.

Polimorfismo: Permite que objetos de diferentes clases sean tratados como objetos de una clase común. En este caso, cada emoción tiene su propia implementación del método liberarse, pero todas pueden ser manejadas de la misma manera a través de la clase Emocion.

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No es necesario hablar de clases para tener polimorfismo.

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