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This builds on the work done by @Brendaoduor in her Google Doc. I tweaked it a little bit further to make the text more about what the reader takeaways are in general, rather than summarizing the page content directly. I also tried to keep it very approachable. Curious what others think of this.

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This builds on the work done by @Brendaoduor in her Google Doc. I tweaked it a little bit further to make the text more about what the reader takeaways are in general, rather than summarizing the page content directly. I also tried to keep it very approachable. Curious what others think of this.

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Pull Request Overview

This PR updates the copy on the Getting Started landing page to emphasize reader takeaways and an approachable tone.

  • Revised the introductory text and section descriptions to make them more engaging
  • Clarified the messaging for topics such as bitcoin uniqueness, design, open design, technology, and hardware

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Great example of how important copy is in design. This copy is much for friendly and engaging. The questions and use of verbs helps with that.

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Revisit the Getting started section landing page
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